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Prompt: Sword, Magic, Book. Set during Voyage of the Dawn Treader. By Request.
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(#) Ithilwen 2008-08-24
Minor flaw: Peter's sword? I don't think Peter was with them on Deathwater Island.Unembellished
(#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-16
Oh, wise Queen Lucy. The decision, made not easily but rightly.
An excellent short piece.Unembellished
(#) mina09 2025-12-27
Hi!
I just finished your story and honestly, it was a very smooth and immersive experience. Your writing naturally creates visuals, and while reading it feels completely cinematic. If adapted into a comic or Webtoon, it could reach even more people.
I’m an artist who works on comics, character designs, and cover art. If you’d ever like to see your story in a visual form, we could have a casual conversation.
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I really loved the story!
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