- Wonderful Story, now is it going to get a bit off lemon added to as it goes along, like your Naruto fic? I do hope so as you do a wonderful job at it.
Anyway I hope you update this fic sometime soon it has alot of potential, and there have been so few great continued Love Hina lately.
Author's responseEh, no plans for lemony bits. Lime and fabservice, yes. Flat out lemon, not for now. Thanks for reviewing.
(#) dogbertcarroll 2007-01-11Although I have a hard time believing
Naru could mistake the Juggernaut for
anything but a massive wall of flesh, I
really liked the way it turned out.
Author's responseKeep in mind Keitaro was submerged underwater to his neck, and Naru was glasses-less. She dipped her hand underwater to feel his chest up, and the steam prevented her from seeing the size difference between him and Kitsune.
- I realy enjoyed reading this story. and hope that you put a new chapter out soon. As I enjoyed reading this one very much.
Though I think you are a bit to harsh about Naru (Though I like a good story that lets her get what is comeing to her for her treatment of Keitaro).
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