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• Falter

  (#) silversilence 2006-02-14

  awww I liked that it was cute.

• Falter

  (#) Qem 2006-04-19

  I liked this a lot. I think you covered the frustration Iruka must of felt when he first met Naruto, as well as how unfair the village has treated Naruto.

• Falter

  (#) meg_ann 2006-05-14

  Wow, I love this story! I wish I could always find Naruto fics this good. It lends so much reality to what Iruka was thinking in the very beginning of the series. Please keep writing.

• Falter

  (#) makani 2006-12-24

  I loved it! The dialogue was gradual and subtle, and it didn't feel forced at all. I also liked how you let your character act as well as speak; gestures and movements conveyed as much meaning as words.

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