(#) nesparatu621 2006-10-06WOW! I loved the fight between Voldemort and Harry/Wormtail. And now Harry knows where Voldemort is, excellent. I also can't wait for Harry to take vengeance on Hannah's father and also on her sister for what he just saw her do. PLEASE get the next part out rapidly.
Author's responseGlad you enjoyed it. I alternate back and forth between this story and Bungle in the Jungle. So it will be 2 weeks for the next update.
- Very exciting!
I love the way you're keeping the victories balanced. Often, the "good guys" win every confrontation, or the "bad guys" win all the way up to the last minute. This is keeping me on the edge of my seat.
Author's responseReal war is seldom one sided. Losses stack up on both sides. Innocent bystanders become caught up. I hope I can continue to meet or exceed your expectations. ~Jim
- Hrm...you and your cliffhangers. Continue this one as quickly as possible please :)
Author's responseOh, I don't think that was a cliffhanger. That was a dramatic finish to the chapter. A cliffhanger would have been ending it with Harry being blown out the window. ~Jim
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-06Darn, Pettigrew's alive. So much for that.
Well, after a terribly injured Harry flattens Peter Abbott in a duel, I hope he'll have Chelsea punished horribly. This could have some serious political ramifications if Abbott is unwilling to look at the facts about his own daughters.
In case it isn't abundantly clear, I loved this chapter.
Author's responseGlad you enjoyed it! We need more chapters of your story I might add. It will be interesting to see how the confrontation between Harry and Peter Abbott plays out. I couldn't kill off Wormtail just yet. He has so much to do in this story... ~Jim
(#) The_Resident 2006-10-07Another excellent chapter. I am really looking forward to Harry's lesson to Mr. Abbott. Keep up the great work and, please, update soon.
Author's responseIt was a fun chapter to write. Creating the circumstances where Harry and Voldy fight but cannot kill each other worked well for the story. The title of the story To Fight the Coming Darkness, may also be an allusion to the struggle inside of Harry Potter. ~Jim
- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved the chapter and I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. This story truly is amazing and I hope you do a sequel to this amazing story. I was hoping that Harry would kill Moldieshorts but alas he didn't oh well, I'm glad you had him get mad at Hannah and Chelsea because they deserve it for the stunt they pulled in the last chapter. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
Author's responseI am happy I continue to meet or exceed your expectations. Current plans have me ending this story with the start of the school year and beginning the sequel there. All of this is subject to change. ~Jim
- Shame about Pettigrew living on. Are all Abbotts asinine?
Author's responseWell in Peter Abbott's defense, he didn't really want to sign his family up for a war. He's benn a bit overprotective of Hannah having had to raise her with her difficult condition. This of course allowed Chelsea to somewhat run amuck and now just when he is realizing that his youngest can in fact be a little shit, he comes in and sees this guy who has been practicing dark magic towering over his precious daughter...~Jim
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