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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) nesparatu621 2006-10-06

  WOW! I loved the fight between Voldemort and Harry/Wormtail. And now Harry knows where Voldemort is, excellent. I also can't wait for Harry to take vengeance on Hannah's father and also on her sister for what he just saw her do. PLEASE get the next part out rapidly.

  Author's response

  Glad you enjoyed it. I alternate back and forth between this story and Bungle in the Jungle. So it will be 2 weeks for the next update.
  
  Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) banner 2006-10-06

  Very exciting!
  I love the way you're keeping the victories balanced. Often, the "good guys" win every confrontation, or the "bad guys" win all the way up to the last minute. This is keeping me on the edge of my seat.

  Author's response

  Real war is seldom one sided. Losses stack up on both sides. Innocent bystanders become caught up. I hope I can continue to meet or exceed your expectations. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-10-06

  The best chapter ever!!!! BRAVO! I can't wait until we get the next chapter. Swift Writing! Brillant!

  Author's response

  I am glad you think so. I personally liked the previous chapter better, but that's just me. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Vermis 2006-10-06

  Hrm...you and your cliffhangers. Continue this one as quickly as possible please :)

  Author's response

  Oh, I don't think that was a cliffhanger. That was a dramatic finish to the chapter. A cliffhanger would have been ending it with Harry being blown out the window. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) c3markh 2006-10-06

  Loved the story and cannot wait to see where this chapter is going

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) snowman 2006-10-06

  Awsome work.

  Author's response

  Thanks! I aim to please. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-06

  Darn, Pettigrew's alive. So much for that.
  
  Well, after a terribly injured Harry flattens Peter Abbott in a duel, I hope he'll have Chelsea punished horribly. This could have some serious political ramifications if Abbott is unwilling to look at the facts about his own daughters.
  
  In case it isn't abundantly clear, I loved this chapter.

  Author's response

  Glad you enjoyed it! We need more chapters of your story I might add. It will be interesting to see how the confrontation between Harry and Peter Abbott plays out. I couldn't kill off Wormtail just yet. He has so much to do in this story... ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) The_Resident 2006-10-07

  Another excellent chapter. I am really looking forward to Harry's lesson to Mr. Abbott. Keep up the great work and, please, update soon.

  Author's response

  It was a fun chapter to write. Creating the circumstances where Harry and Voldy fight but cannot kill each other worked well for the story. The title of the story To Fight the Coming Darkness, may also be an allusion to the struggle inside of Harry Potter. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-10-07

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved the chapter and I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. This story truly is amazing and I hope you do a sequel to this amazing story. I was hoping that Harry would kill Moldieshorts but alas he didn't oh well, I'm glad you had him get mad at Hannah and Chelsea because they deserve it for the stunt they pulled in the last chapter. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

  Author's response

  I am happy I continue to meet or exceed your expectations. Current plans have me ending this story with the start of the school year and beginning the sequel there. All of this is subject to change. ~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) DrT 2006-10-07

  Shame about Pettigrew living on. Are all Abbotts asinine?
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Well in Peter Abbott's defense, he didn't really want to sign his family up for a war. He's benn a bit overprotective of Hannah having had to raise her with her difficult condition. This of course allowed Chelsea to somewhat run amuck and now just when he is realizing that his youngest can in fact be a little shit, he comes in and sees this guy who has been practicing dark magic towering over his precious daughter...~Jim

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