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Chapter Twelve
1 reviewWhile Yuna and Tidus speak with the fayth in Bevelle, Lulu returns to the airship and Cid. There, for the first time, she begins to realize how much her feelings for him have grown.
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Drawn Toward Unity
(#) helluin 2007-03-29
Ouch. I read this chapter before, I'm sure, but it's just as awkward this time. As it should be. Lulu can't change that fast. But I love the interaction between them in this -- and as usual, I love what you're doing with sensible Rikku taking things in stride. Also dear Wakka being dead wrong, as USUAL!
Nitpicking:
Tense-- She unconsciously bit((e)) her bottom lip
Needs closing quote-- "Just don't expect me to ever call you mom, okay?
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