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The End
44 reviewsThe Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...
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Harry's Second Chance
(#) JBern 2006-10-07
Nice finish to a quality story. Again I am jealous that I haven't been able to use the words "The End" on one of my stories just yet. ~JimAuthor's response
Ah, you must have a life! Now, which of the other four stories that I have half done should I work on? (all time travel stories -- a 6th year (NC-17, big Harem), a 5th year (NC-17, Harry and three girls), a 4th year (R), and a Marauder's era (R). Anyone have any preferences?
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(#) rtc5873 2006-10-07
One of the best stories you've written. I think that you have really grown as a writer.
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(#) c3markh 2006-10-07
Loved this story and have been following it since it had first posted. Thanks for writing and I have enjoyed all your great stories.Harry's Second Chance
(#) banner 2006-10-07
happy sigh
I love a happy ending. And a nice long epilogue - I always want to know what happens next...Harry's Second Chance
(#) Skoell 2006-10-07
brilliant story!! hope you will write more stories like this one...
can't rate anymore good stuff...Harry's Second Chance
(#) siaru 2006-10-07
Excellent wrapup to an excellent tale. Do the people here at ficwad know about your body of work over on fictionalley? Please propagate those works over here as well (I'd like to see them over on fictionauthors.net too, just to be safe) -- it has been proven there that a well-meaning admin can be almost as destructive as the moderators-run-amock over of fanfictiondotnet, and your stories should not disappear. Ditto your stuff on restrictedsection -- you've got NC17 parking here. (Yeah, I've been following your work for a little while.)
Now, which of the other four stories that I have half done should I work on? (all time travel stories -- a 6th year (NC-17, big Harem), a 5th year (NC-17, Harry and three girls), a 4th year (R), and a Marauder's era (R). Anyone have any preferences?
Work your way back along that list in list-forward temporally-backward order, please.
If you're looking for a challenge, try tackling 1ps viewpoint a la Draco664's Apprentice Harry/, one vp per chapter to start. That's about as far as you can get from your customary 3pu methods, and should give you a chance to really dig into each of your characters' psyches and pull them out for inspection. A lot was implied in /Harry's Second Chance but not explored (such as Hermione's evolving/merging vp, Sirius' aboutface on the Muggleborn -- were they even on speaking terms by the end of the story? -- and Snape's grudging maturation) so this could be a real playground for you.
However you do it, thanks for the good reads so far, and please keep 'em comin'. B*BHarry's Second Chance
(#) jbstarnes1 2006-10-07
It doesn't seem like a story so much as just a list of things that happened.
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