- Really good chapter!!
Great quidicht play. I like the changes in the story, way better, but is sad that Hermione have to be petrified so soon.
Neville is begining to be to full of himself, Dumbledore is really making a huge mistake and he will probably not notice it until is to late.
I really hope to read more soon.
Author's responsethanks... Quidditch is hard to write!
- Sorry about the last chapter it bunmited itself, I didn't done a thing...
Anyhow, what another great chapter, I lol when Draco wanted to turn Ron's underwear into earthworms becuase he took all Chocolate Crawlies.
Looks like Draco and Hermione getting together doesn't seem to bother me as much as Neville dating Ginny... I think that Dumbledore might have something to do with this.
Percy is sach a git, I think he's worse in this story then in JKR... book.
Neville is being a bigger git then ever, I hope you do something about has I soon, as I really don't like him.
Poor Hermione, I hope everything goes ok, I think that Hermione and Harry might get together instead of Harry and Ginny... I just hope that Ginny doesn't go with Neville.
so once again, PLEASE, I ask again PLEASE don't have Neville dating Ginny, he is such a git and asshole, sorry for the French... but I don't like Neville in this story...
Anyhow, keep up the great work, and update soon.
Author's responseNeville/Ginny: I'm not going to say that a powerful wizard isn't influencing that but I'll swear it's not Dumbledore
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-14Dumbledore, it seems, is beginning to think of Harry as a bit more formidable. I still find it hard to believe that he so thoroughly ignored the "marked as his equal" portion of the prophecy, but such is life.
I hope Harry DOESN'T end up with Ginny, anyone but her. The fact that she went so quickly from stalking Harry to Neville speaks volumes about her depth, though she's probably being influenced.
I'm really looking forward to reading more from you; it's been really great so far.
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