(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-10-14Lots of weasley stuff here. Interesting, although I'm not too big a fan of that tribe. It always seems like Grimauld Place is safr for everyone but Harry, even if he owns it! I do so Hope you will write Harry s a more realistic teenage boy that JKR does. (hint, hint.. I know from experience, that MY son would never put up with the crap that Harry does. She also went from Harry doing 'great magic' to being a total write off in the magic and balls departments.) Any way, looking forward to more of this story.
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-15Okay I read your story. First of all its extremely well written, professionally done in fact, although I like independent harry I got to admit I am getting awful tired of crybaby wimp its all my fault harry potter. I realize this is your story and this type of story needs that type of harry I guess, but the main thing I want to say your summary really interested me, but so far there has been two chapters and no where near anything like you describe, I hope it shows up soon and gives him the will to get on with his life. be looking for hopefully more updates.
- nice story!
after the first chapter i would have thought that harry likes hermione too...this would be a nice touch for the story...
well...i'm a h/hr-shipper...so i interpret easier in that direction =P
Author's responseAre you related to Sybil Trelawney perhaps? I'll need to rethink my approach if I'm that obvious!
- What a great chapter, I like that Molly called Harry her child. After reading Skoell review and seeing your reply, I can't see this story can be a h/hr it's more like r/hr story.
Well anyhowm, I can't wait to see what happens next... so keep up the great work and update soon.
- In all truth, Harry never had any real friends. Not at Durskaban nor at Hogwash. The allknowing goat fucker has made damn sure Harry has no reason to live. But what he doesn't realize is that, he's giving Harry less and less reason to want to even fight Moldysnorts. Then there's the possibility that if Harry comes into a reasonable sum of gold, he might just decide there's no reason for him to stay in England and fight a war no one's ever trained him for. Imagine the old goat fuckers face if should learn that his weapon has left England fro some other country and refuses to even return the old goat fuckers letters. Never mind meet or even talk to anyone connected to him. If Harry refuses to accept any and all letters from anyone who knows that man, then there's no way a tricked portkey letter can bring him back against his will. Nor would any member of the burnt chicken club be able to grab him and use one to again force his return against his will. And every reader knows that the old goat fucker would resort to just that to make damn sure Harry fulfilled that prophecy. Not to mention died in the doing. The best way to describe the old goat fucker would be THICK AS A BRICK!! Or maybe a Black Hole. After all, information goes in and nothing ever comes out. Ask yourself these questions. WHO CREATED LORD VOLDEMORT? HOW MANY PEOPLE DIED NEEDLESSLY BECAUSE DUMB-DUMKB WITHELD NEEDED INFORMATION? WHY WOULD HE INSIST ON HARRY7 RETURNING TO ANABUSIVE HOUSE( I REFUSE TO CALL THAT PRISON HIS HOME! REGARDLESS OF WHAT THE OLD GOAT FUCKER THINKS! ) EVERY YEAR? WHY DOES THE MEDINURSE AT HOGWASH NEVER TRULY DO HER JOB TOWARDS HARRY? WHY DOES THE OLD GOAT FUCKER REFUSE TO LISTEN TO ANYTHING HARRY TELLS HIM ABOUT SNAPE? WHY DO THE PROFESSORS NOT LISTEN TO ANYONE BUT THE OLD GOAT FUCKER? THESE AND MANY MANY NEED TO BE ANSWERED TO TRULY FIX THE CANNON STORIES. Personally, I think Harry really needs to simply leave the country and only then send the old goat fucker a note telling him " YOU CREATED TOM SO YOU GET TO STOP HIM. AS FOR MYSELF, I'VE LEFT ENGLEND FOREVER AND WILL NOT EVER BE RETURNING. THEREFOR, PULL YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS AND DEAL WITH TOMMY BOY AND HIS DEATH EATERS AS THEY SHOULD BE! DEAD MEN BURN RAPE AND TORTURE NO FAMILIES! FORGET YOUR PURE BLOOD STUPIDTY AND YOUR GREATER GOOD AND MAYBE MAGICAL BRITAIN WILL SURVIVE ! I SAY THIS AS I DO NOT BELIEVE THAT THE REST OF THE WORLD WILL PLAY NICE WITH ANY TERRORIST THAT STARTS ANY SHIT IN THEIR COUNRTY! IF YOU CAN'T BRING YOURSELF TO DO IT PERSONALLY, THEN GET SOMEONE WHO WANTS TO SEE THOSE ASSWIPES DEAD, GIVE THEM PORTKEYS TO THE MIDDLE OF THE ATLANTIC OR PACIFIC OCEANS TO DISPOSE OF THEM WITH. SEE YA,NOT GONNA BE YA!! ". That'll surely piss off the old goat fucker! If Harry's really smart, he won't even give the old goat fucker a hint as to what country he's going to. Or maybe he should suggest a country far away from the one that he's actually going to. Misdirection can be so much fun. Now to you davidg, please update this as soon as you can ! This has so much promise. But get Harry the hell out of Durskaban!! The only way he'll ever grow strong is to be away from his supposed family and out from under the old goat fucker's thumb!
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