The summer before Harry and Luna's second year brings fun, a vacation, and the beginnnig of their next adventure.
Been looking forward to an update for quite some time now, sad that it was so short thou.
This chapter was saved by Bella's escape. Otherwise it was a bit too much summary and not enough detail.
Still enjoyed it, though.
I loved this fic when was just a chapter, little crazy idea, you wrote a good history whit it. Congratulations
Wow... what a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work and update soon please.
I just had to come back and reread this story after reading Musings' "Family Inseperable" over on FFA.
I enjoyed it as much as I did the first time reading it and hope that you are going to continue this.
I love this story. It's a very different idea (which is a good thing) than anything that I've read thus far. Keep it up.
I was wondering who the other escapee was. I was fluctuating between Barty Jr and Bellatrix. Can I assume that she's been possessed by her master? It sounds like it to me. I also suspect that she'll at least try to become the new History of Magic teacher. I'm curious about her animagus form, but I'm sure you'll reveal it in your own time.
I love that Neville won the contest. I was guessing Hermione, but he makes more sense.
I really like this story...but, you've got 3rd years on training brooms...were is the logic.
p.s. keep up with great story writing.
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