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• Orders

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-19

  More of a sketch than a story, but I don't think that Mustang has a very conflicted view of womanhood. I don't think that he'd have a problem seeing Hawkeye as both babealicious and competant.

• Orders

  (#) annadb8goddess 2006-12-26

  not to bad, could use some more streams of consciousness and could be a little longer. you could try and put examples of said helpfulness. if you change it i would like to be notified!

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