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Harry Explains
21 reviewsWhen would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, Luna meets Harry and then Dumbledore meets with Harry and friends.
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Triwizard Redux
(#) Skoell 2006-10-21
great chapter! but isn't harry revealing too much information about what he knows to dumbledore, if he really thinks he is so dark/uncaring??Author's response
Harry is throwing everything he has at Dumbledore, in part to vent and in part to shock the Headmaster. It should help adjust the balance between them
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(#) BenRG 2006-10-21
Gah! What a place to end it Doc! Oh well, at least you guaranteed that I will be looking out for further chapters as they are written.
That aside, I do like how you do your Redo!Harry characterisation. Harry is always in a hurry, realising exactly how critical the times are and how little room for error there is in trying to fix things.
That aside, you can have too much of a good thing and I hope that you avoid the common mistake of making Harry too powerful and too all-knowing. Having him permanently one step ahead would be a little boring.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10Triwizard Redux
(#) Bentulsa 2006-10-21
i really like where this is going. can not wait for more. hope to see padfoot show up and give dummbles a yell or two.Triwizard Redux
(#) Nautilus 2006-10-21
Brilliant. i loved the 'talk' with Dumbles. Best way to put him in his place. Where did Harry happen to get the various items, and when? i would like to know a bit of that background info. cheers.
I personally HATE Ron, but i will go with whatever you decide for this story. I hope to see improved relationships between Harry and everyone else (well maybe not Dumbles or Serverus) but i would like to see more Minnie, and Neville, Luna, Susan, Fleur and the rest. cheers for now, and congrats
oh, and update soonAuthor's response
I didn't think I needed to actually say it, but Harry had a whole week when he was supposed to be researching the First Task when he already knew what he was going to do. Instead, Harry fetched the Horcruxes and broke them.
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(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-21
Great chapter, I love this no-nonsense Harry. Can't wait to read more.Triwizard Redux
(#) Jimm 2006-10-21
Moving along right smartly, I see. :-) Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.Triwizard Redux
(#) patronus 2006-10-21
Nice 2 chapter! I always like supter power inteligent Harry, specially independent! this is promising!!!Triwizard Redux
(#) Gioia 2006-10-21
By the end of this chapter I felt as stunned as Dumbledore, Hermione and Remus must've! Great job in carrying our emotions along with theirs!
And I'm so glad you had everything laid out on the table (er, figuratively as well as literally, I suppose, given the horcruxes he pulled out!) early on. It's always perplexed me why I've never seen a fanfic author propose the idea of killing Wormtail, Voldemrt and the snake at the old Riddle house when Voldemort was in such a helpless state.Author's response
I wondered that to, and wrote this in part to get that thought out of my head
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