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Lilin's Note
(#) Karthur 2005-07-08
A nice little glimpse into the world of Lilin and the other mermaids. I always believed she had some sort of "crush" on the Hero, and her desire to write to him and be accepted is well described here.
Well written, as usual.Lilin's Note
(#) fyre_byrd 2005-10-05
I really enjoyed this little story from Lilin's perspective. Her sense of being an outsider among the humans is very well written. I like how you pepper her thoughts with sea metaphors as well.
Lilin's great pleasure in the things she has learned from the humans is very realistic, as is her embarrassment at her mistakes in dealing with humans.
You do an excellent job of portraying a seaperson experiencing culture shock and you do it in neat and quite lovely language.Lilin's Note
(#) monotolang 2006-07-24
This is nice. I like how you wrote Lilin, I didn't like her, but maybe, like you say, it was just her bad english that annoyed me.
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