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The Afterlife Unraveled
(#) constantinexfreak 2006-11-18
Again, this is an amazing story. Your descriptions were great. Made me want to go to church.The Afterlife Unraveled
(#) LadyJones 2006-11-25
A sad chapter, and it ended well, I can't wait for the next chapter!The Afterlife Unraveled
(#) xXxMetalHeadxXx 2006-11-29
wow....i have to say u are one of my favorite writters. Your story made me really think about my life. I'm gonna make some serious changes. I loved your metaphores i loves the story. i loved how insightful it was. i love the story period. Honestly, i think u r a little full of your self when u say ur writting is 'sophisticated' but u have a pass to say that cause it is.The Afterlife Unraveled
(#) xXxMetalHeadxXx 2006-11-29
wow....i jsut read my review and saw alot of typos.....sorry, im a little jet lagged from yesterday. By the way, i hope to write like u someday. right now i have a bitter sarcastic story about Paris Hilton. i hate hr.
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