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(#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-16
I'm about out of rating points, but I think the last rating I saw got it right: ambience.
This felt real. Lewis kind of glossed over the whole dying thing -- a sudden jolt, and they're in Narnia but more real than the real one.
If I were to make one change, I would take out the phrase, "Peter was that kind of person." Just let the actions and thoughts convey what needs to be said -- they don't need any author's P.O.V. comments.
But even that's a minor quibble. Thank you.Home
(#) mina09 2025-12-27
Hey there!
Your story engaged me right from the beginning. The world-building and emotions are so vivid that I kept imagining everything as comic panels. If a comic version were created, it would look visually very strong and could attract even more readers.
I’m a Webtoon/comic artist and also work on character and cover designs. If you’d ever like to explore a visual adaptation, even just a small scene, we could talk about it.
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Wonderful story!
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