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Prologue: Confrontations
3 reviewsHarry Potter has been trained by a certain Dark wizard since he turned five. What happens when now fifteen years old Harry arrives his first time to Hogwarts to get his OWLs?
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The Path Chosen
(#) dragonfire86 2006-11-04
I have to say that it's an very interesting beginning.
That Lestrange character looks more like a scholar than a fighter, and he will be a surely remarquable Master for Harry.
Good storyAuthor's response
That's probably because he is a scholar... Thanks for the review! Random ShinobiThe Path Chosen
(#) LoveSnape 2006-11-04
alright! i can tell this is gonna be fabulous ;D Can't wait to read on!
Much love,
SaffronAuthor's response
Thanks! Random ShinobiThe Path Chosen
(#) HeWhoComesWithTheDaw 2006-11-04
"Tom 'I-am-shit-at-anagrams' Riddle"
If you're going to take text from someone else's story, at least pay tribute to that author. There's not much worse than a thief.Author's response
Eh? So someone has used that before? My uneducated quess is that at least dozen other Authors have used it. Do I have to make a deduction that I cannot make characters say anything that somebody else might have used before? Besides, how should I know whether it had been used or not? Random ShinobiThe Path Chosen
(#) nnnnnnnnn 2006-11-10
I couldn't help but notice several formatting errors, where you forgot to close your italics after thoughts ended. Just wanted to point that out ;)Author's response
I feel like an idiot. I had made a typo in the command and then copy-pasted it... Random ShinobiThe Path Chosen
(#) MJLuvsPolar 2007-08-20
Wow, I absolutely LOVE the premise of this story - 1 chapter in and I'm already calculating whether I have enough time to read it all tonight!
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