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Chapter one: A Long Awaited Abduction
3 reviewsHarry Potter has been trained by a certain Dark wizard since he turned five. What happens when now fifteen years old Harry arrives his first time to Hogwarts to get his OWLs?
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The Path Chosen
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-04
This is an outstanding start. I can't wait to read more.
I'm sure you've already realized this, but there's a formatting error that seems to come at random. Just scroll through one of the chapters and I'm sure you'll spot it. It randomly inserts a series of numbers and other characters. Pretty weird.Author's response
Whoops! My bad, but I have an excuse: My MS Works is incompatable with... well, nearly everything. Anyway, that problem is now taken care of. Thanks for your review! Random ShinobiThe Path Chosen
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-11-04
I think this is an absolutely marvelous story so far and I am anxious to read more!The Path Chosen
(#) Lurker2345 2006-11-05
This was an excellent sart and I'm now eagerly looking forward to reading the rest of what you've already written here. One thing I noticed, though. Didn't the Dursleys live in Surrey, not London? And I'm pritty sure Krouch never became minister in canon, but this is your AU and you can do everything you want. Keep it up and thanks for writing this story.Author's response
Surrey, while not directly part of London, is part of the great London area (or whatever they are calling it). Besides, I don't remember ever claiming that they would live in London... And about Crouch, in this world his son was never thrown into Azkaban, he simply vanished (by courtesy of Kheiron). Thus Crouch's reputation was never tarnished and he got the top position. Thanks for reading! Random Shinobi
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