by lassarina 2 reviewsCloud brings sad tidings to Elmyra.
Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Cloud Strife, Elmyra - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006-11-07 - Updated: 2006-11-08 - 463 words - Complete
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This could stand to be fleshed out a bit more. The readers already know what Cloud is going to say. They don't know how Elmyra will react. Try focusing on that.
Personally, I loved it. Short and sweet and to the point. That's not a bad thing! Perfect how it is. I look forward to reading more from you.
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