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This Bitter Pill
(#) sannemannetje 2006-11-09
wow, this is soooo sad. I feel really bad for Pete. I really love this story, it's beautiful! sorry I didn't review before, but i'm reading like all the stories here, so it would be impossible to review them all. I guess this is the end? it's great, reaaaaally good:)This Bitter Pill
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-09
that ending is so...absolute. so the journey is over?
i couldn't hold back the tears with this one. i must say, i never saw that coming. i was half expecting (or maybe just hoping) you would play the "and i woke up" game. i'm glad you didn't, because it would have been cliche, but at the same time i didn't want it to end. definitely bittersweet.Author's response
yeah, i was definately toying with the idea of having her wake up, but then i thought no, i want this to be sad (lol).
my original idea was to have her wake up and then find out a few months later that she was pregnant again with Pete's baby this time and they were all going to live happily ever after and blah blah, but i thought no, thats not what this story is about, its about heartbreak and loss, not happy endings.This Bitter Pill
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-26
sniffs ok i couldnt review until it was over. but here are my views:
corbin is a slut.
pete deserves better.
pete is very... wow. caring.
patrick should've known better.
the baby should've lived.
corbin should not have commited suicide.
i almost cried.
i know a corbin in real life, but tis a dude. hehe.
ok, rather good story! it was sad :[
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