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The Third Task and After
25 reviewsWhen would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, the events during and after the Third Task.
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Triwizard Redux
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-11-09
Great story. You gave us readers a lot to think about in it, and a lot of A-Hah! areas. Some snickers and chuckles.People to hate and those of course that we cheered on. Again, great story.Triwizard Redux
(#) Shaggy37 2006-11-09
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I read that update of Sunrise Over Britian, and that they did, but yours has a certian style theirs didn't have, I mean you used the Liason between the two worlds where as they didn't. Either way I can't wait to see what happens next. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Triwizard Redux
(#) patronus 2006-11-09
well, this is cool. I hope you continue the story of the foundation of the school, and all of the political maneuvering because I think this is pretty interesting!!!Triwizard Redux
(#) tara_li 2006-11-09
Congrats to Bob & Alyx, as though you'd have been the first to use the Royal Perogative in a story?
Nice plot point, though.Triwizard Redux
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-09
I loved it. Your method of dispatching Voldemort was excellent, as was what pretty much everyone said to Fudge.Triwizard Redux
(#) mewombat 2006-11-10
Awesome - as I have come to expect from everything of yours that I have read. Hope this continues or has a sequel coming. Thank you Doctor!
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(#) brad 2006-11-10
You might have to write a story one day which has Harry really struggling to defeat Voldemort, or even one where he is being overcome - in a single battle or in a war of attrition - and others need to come to his aid. Coming right after Second Chance this super-powerful Harry's somewhat pompous posturing in front of the crowd was a bit egotistical (again).
Interesting way to kill Voldemort. If Harry had killed him outright - say, by decapitation - would the DEs have then survived, not being drained of their magic and lifeforce by their desperate master?
Regardless, your whole little sub-plot of the DEs dying was a good one; I don't think I've ever seen that idea treated before.
Come one. Snape telling one little fib in support of Harry's cover story does NOT fulfill two life-debts, surely?
Again, I liked the time-turner touch, although I'll have to re-read this again to be convinced that he was really necessary; for example surely just one Harry could have cast the 'undetectable persuasion charms' while making his speech?
Jeeze, Hermione's saying 'titties' got me quite peeved. It might be a personal foible but I don't care much for that (coarse, unsophisticated, crude) word and I don't believe it would be in character for Hermione to use it. Ugh.Triwizard Redux
(#) dennisud 2008-01-18
The Sunrise & Sunset over Britain is one of my favorites and your becoming one of my favorite authors!
dennisud
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