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Erm i dnt relli have a tittle for this
(#) Rous 2006-11-14
Well, you really must change the title. You had me thinking this was one of those seven-year-olds who think they can write. :P
This is very poignant. I can feel the pain, because I have been there. Never toyed with blades, though. I am allergic to pain.
One thing that may help: punctuation. It would greatly enhance the reading. Otherwise, this was great.
Thank you for sharing.Author's response
lol i am !! well mentalli neway,
oh, i hate pain and blood but it seemed the onli way to help well b4 i discovered writin things dwn.
And thanx im nt the brightest spark when it comes to grammar oh n spelling.
And no problem thank you for reading and reviewin it means alotErm i dnt relli have a tittle for this
(#) kristina1 2007-02-08
WOW thats really good!!!^_^ I like the poem!!!_
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