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Lucifer is at a "bar" and meets a different man. Grr...no violence in the prologue...sorry about that warning.

Category: Fantasy - Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006-11-12 - Updated: 2006-11-12 - 2998 words

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A Heaven Amongst Hells

(#) FadingLight 2006-11-16

Interesting. I enjoyed the conversation between Blaise and Lucifer and I was impressed with the slow measured pace the story took. Very descriptive and enjoyable.
A Heaven Amongst Hells

(#) elizedward23 2006-11-17

I definitely love it! I totally dived into the story, and I felt like I was there, really witnessing their conversation. The only nit picky problem I find is the first paragraph. I like your use of symbolism, but to come right out and say it has Biblical reference without really saying what the significance is feels undeveloped.