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• The power of the elemental

  (#) TheIllusiveOne 2006-11-15

  I'm enjoying the fic, however...
  
  He looked to his aunt, who was still sitting quietly on the breakfast table, staring at him. "Aunt Petunia, I will arrange some money to pay for all the extra food I am eating here, don't worry about that. I cannot help it, but I am very hungry. Is it possible that I can fry some more eggs?"
  
  Having Harry paying back the Dursleys years of abuse by giving them exrta money is just ridiculous.. Other then that though, it's an entertaining fic.

  Author's response

  You have a point there.
  
  I will correct that in that chapter.
  
  Thanks for the review,
  
  Wim

• The power of the elemental

  (#) Dragen 2006-11-18

  What another great chapter, Luna, Ginny and Hermione seem to like the new Harry, so are theose three going to be in Harry's Hearm?? I hope so:D Keep up the great work.

• The power of the elemental

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-23

  Outstanding chapter. I like how this is developing.
  
  gunny

• The power of the elemental

  (#) Bronze 2015-09-17

  I feel Harry made a major mistake saying anything in front of Remus. Dumb-Dumb and the order or the burnt pigeon are responsible for his continuing to return to Durskaban every summer. Dumb-Dumb dumped him on them and does nothing to insure his safety from them. As Remus is a member he feels he must tell Dumb-Dumb everything that he learns from Harry. Whereas Dumb-Dumb doesn't feel he needs to tell nor do anything to safeguard Harry. Therefor keeping the order ignorant of any and all developments in his life needs to be done. Dumb-Dumb has proved throughout the years that the only thing important to him concerning the life of one Harry James Potter is that A) he's alive and reasonably healthy, B) he's doing and staying exactly what and where he wants him. If you disagree, look at Harry's life with the Dursley's. Then his years at Hogwash. Nothing has been done to A) insure he survives the final battle with Moldyshorts, B) train him to actually be able to stnd against that insane wackjob! And who is responsible for all this? The supposed leader of the Light Albus Dumbledore. Another question to ask is, WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE WILLS OF JAMES AND LILLY POTTER? They knew they were in a war with a psyco after them and you want me to believe they DIDN'T leave a will? Lilly was supposed to be the smartest witch of her generation and yet she neglected to get together with her husband and make a will? That's like standing under the first stage of a Saturn 5 rocket at take off and expecting to lie! NOT BLOODY LIKELY!!! So where's the will?! And what does it say that it has been hidden or outright destroyed? Albie has a lot of answers that he refuse to give.

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