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• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) Dragen 2006-11-18

  What a cliff hanger ending, I can't wait to see the sequle, of the story. Keep up the great work.

  Author's response

  Sequel is there. 'Lord and Lady Harry Potter' I hate that story.

• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) twilliams1797 2006-11-20

  the oddness of the laqnguage is interesting and curious, and I will not criticize the writer for that at all. looking at the words ,the intent is understood, and it is a good exercise in writing and learning. I do like the ideas and concepts here, there are some here that I have not seen before and as such, has been an enjoyable story to read. Not bad for a first story.

  Author's response

  Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.

• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-12-01

  I really don't like Harry/Ginny stories because I just feel an underlying manipulation there. I feel the same way about Ron/Hermione ships. In the real world boys quit there harrassment of girls because they like them in pre-double digits, and Ron/Hermione would end in death or divorce in the real world. My dogma stated, you have a very interesting and well written story. I look forward to reading the sequel next.

• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) Anaknisatanas 2006-12-04

  I liked this story. I thought you did a good job with Harry and bringing the demons in was a nice touch. And since there are two years they have until the demons are back they should be able to come up with some pretty good defences and weapons. And I'm really wondering about Snape... someone needs to do something about him.

• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) am12 2007-11-12

  There is one rather glaring grammar/wording error that permeates this story, and that is the phrase "of cause"
  
  The proper term is, "of course". I lost count of the number of times this error was made. I must presume that English is not your first language, as the error is so surprising.
  

• Lord Baron Harry Potter

  (#) Scabbers1957 2010-01-10

  I think that this was of the more original version of this type of story. I can't wait to read the sequal.
  
  :)

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