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• Project Innocence

  (#) Rab 2006-11-24

  Still pretty interesting. I'd add a little more detail on some parts though if I were you. It's still good though as it is.

  Author's response

  I skipped out on the details for a reason. On fp too many people were bitching about how they wanted things left up to their imagination, so that's what I did.

• Project Innocence

  (#) GR21 2006-12-04

  i like it. It is a little more fast paced then your other stories but otherwise i think you should add more i cant wait

• Project Innocence

  (#) water_dragon 2006-12-05

  wow... i liked it, even though it was a bit different to your normal style it was pretty good... what am i saying? AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

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