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The last straw
12 reviewsThe last chapter of the Parallel Universe tells you about the inevitable. The necessary. The logic of FrostedGlass. (Oxy-moron me.) The outcome enables us, dear readers, to witness how the PU and t...
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The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) riaryder 2006-11-25
Yay, Sheena. You go girl!
(I so can't pull phrases like that off)
Thank God he got rid of the Joyce-bitch. Now, about Sheena and Patrick hooking up........Author's response
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(#) bandgeekfreak 2006-11-25
"but his eyes clearly read "thank you". And it was even underlined" This made me giggle. Not sure why, damn you Pete and your ability to put on eyeliner better then me!
I liked the president thing. :)Author's response
I thought you might like that since you liked that "Mary had a little lamb" crap.The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-25
i found the following abnormally hilarious:
I didn´t necessarily appeal to members of the (male) gay community - alluding to the time when greta hit on her...gah. priceless
but his eyes clearly read "thank you". And it was even underlined. your so witty that i actually spewed a chocolate chip onto my computer screen when i read this. you've got talent, ma'lady.
Did I just use the word "blessing"? I sounded like my grandma when talking about her diapers. ahh, blessing. such a beautiful word.
looking as if the president had suddenly learned how to pronounce... his own name correctly. - the sad thing is that i can actually picture that look of surprise.
and this...
He blushed and so did I, pulling my hand away quickly. - would this be the 2nd sexually charged moment between patrick and sheena? okay, yes...i realize it's this first in PU, but don't correct me. i want to believe they are going to finally bone sometime in the near future.
now it's time for me to cry because there is no more PU. pee-you. ha, that's kinda funnyAuthor's response
Only Crystal can offend you ("abnormally") when giving out praise. ;)
Please, the Greta thing is about to replace the fucked-up hair thing. Yes, "blessing" is a beautiful word. That´s the first time I actually used it ever. Not sure I´m allowed to, being an atheist. (Wait, I think Pete used it in CH too...) Well, at least the DoJ has a smarter president than the US. I think every antfarm has a smarter president than the US. You ahead and believe all you want. ;)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-25
ok so now patrick and sheena should get together. sighs for some reason i always think that the 'herione' should be with somebody. damn. i guess if you've ever read my stories then you know that tho. :[ but u know u luv it ;)Author's response
There´s gotta be a echo in the review section somewhere, I swear. All I ever read is Patrick and Sheena should get together. ;) Hello! Does anybody care about what Mr. Meatball does?
Thanks for the r&r. Also, thank you that you will update goddamn soon. ;)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) luckysgc921 2006-11-25
blink...whistles go sheena! woot! I esspecially love that Patrick didn't fall over groveling to Joyce or get mad at Sheena.
great chapter. i heart it.Author's response
Patrick knows Sheena is right. And I know that Patrick is right. Thank you for your constant review. I heart that. :)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-11-25
Semi-happy endings! Yay!!!Author's response
Hey, it´s line with semi-good fanfic! Yay!!! ;)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-11-26
Não não o fim! Realmente assim amei este pequeno universo paralelo, ai viverei. É se você continuar escrevendo e pôr o original no correio de outra maneira vou me adquirir whitdraws da minha ficção de leque favorita.
Ha I did find a new way to tell you what I thought. And if your nice I'll tell you what that means...if i can remeber.Author's response
Ha ha, you´re plonkesque! ;) I don´t know Portuguese but I know some other languages... so I´ll entertain you by giving an "educated" guess as to what this means:
Something... something about "really"... something "parallel universe" + something about "to live or lively"... "continues"... "original"... "one of my favorite reads"
Well, I´m not really nice. But I will be nice to you because my translation is probably only semi-correct. So, enlighten me please.The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-11-26
And I really butchered that last comment I left if any one actually knows portuguese don't laugh at meAuthor's response
That´s right. Laugh at Sheena.The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-26
but his eyes clearly read "thank you". And it was even underlined You are a genius.
Faithful friends come in hats. And, sometimes, in chocolate bar wrappers. Amen to that.
I took a seat on his huge bean bag, pulling my legs up and crossing them Native American -style.* Eghh...I dunno
I loved this chapter, I can't believe you pulled all this off - you're so intelligent. If I had an ounce of that - I'd take over the world - instead I'll use DoJ as my vessel, lol.
Man this was some pretty awesome writing.
See? I'm being nice!
xxxAuthor's response
Yes, I am a genius. Because in those lines I managed not to point out Sheena´s fucked-up hair.
I can´t believe I could (Pa)trick you into believing I´m intelligent. I also can´t believe you´re being nice. In fact, I think this is Katy being sarcastic. And I am appalled. This review sucked. ;)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) duckapple 2006-11-26
I love you.
A lot a lot.
We should make a billion babies and sell them on Ebay.Author's response
Agreed. But we´ll only sell the ones that inherit my wire brush hair.
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