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Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-30
ah yes. that last chapter was nice to my eyes. you see, i have really bad eyesite. and if all the words are in a huge paragraph, i cannot read it without hurting. so i usually dont. but your last chapter was good for me :] and i have to say...
you. kick. ass.
hehe. seriously. this is an amazing story. it has me guessing and laughing all over the place. you're an amazing writer, and i cant wait for more. so please update soon (and please keep your chapters like this one lol) cause i cant wait for more!Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-01
Ha! Great Update! Here's Why:
- Roberta - she's the greatest character in this plot.
- I couldn't help but smirk as a few 96-pound 13-year olds screamed and held up signs with my name on them. - Should I laugh? Honestly?
- "A condom, mom?"
"Just take it, Peter."
HAHAHAHA! Pete's Mom is awesome,but not more awesome than Alex's Mom, who's in turn is no more awesome than my own....
- "That just means you have seen the Fall Out Boy beach house; it's twice this size and made completely of hundred dollar bills."
Indeed...this was a line of monstrous wit....I loved it
You need to update Stat. This could cure my stinking cold....
~K
xxxCobwebs On My Zipper
(#) scarrlifigous 2007-04-01
"How about after Philly, you and me can go to my island called Never-Never land and we can live forever there drinking out of coconuts and wearing coonskin caps."
I'm in.
:]
Ooooh, roadtrips almost certainly mean blood, sweat, and tears.
Have a point, dearest.Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) ssketchator 2007-04-15
I adore corndogs, and this story.
And I have honestly, truly, really gotten an almost identical condom speech.
Lastly, the line about the beach house being made of hundred dollar bills made me laugh a lot.
Love the story.
ssketchator
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