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I Don't Know How You Do It
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-02
uh oh. or maybe yay. i'm not sure if her dad being back in her life is good for her or not.
hmmm.
update soon!I Don't Know How You Do It
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-04
Damn you, there goes the second rating point...
I so LOVED the parallel thing between Patrick mopping away the blood and Bree seeing her razor. Stunning. I am stunned.
I'm probably in no position to pass on judgments like that (but that doesn't really keep me from doing so): I believe your writing's really improved.
I am very impressed. :)Author's response
thanks i am grinning like an idiot now haha :))))I Don't Know How You Do It
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-04
I think it's really interesting how Bree is dealing with everything that has gone on.
Alex is right, her throwing out the razor blade and the whole blood thing was very powerful.
And to be honest - we don't care about time lines here at ficwad - this is fiction, we can do what the hell we want!!I Don't Know How You Do It
(#) FallOutGrl 2006-12-04
gasp OMG Her dad????? Holy shit! Please update soon. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!
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