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Winter Warmth
(#) Trouble_In_Shangri_L 2005-10-07
Awwww, that was so perfectly in character that I had to giggle the entire way. Sesshoumaru is so hard-nosed, yet he knows he cares about Rin. It's sweet in a scary way.
On top of that you have immaculate spelling and grammar, which is hard to find anywhere these days. I commend you.
I enjoyed this immensely.Winter Warmth
(#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23
Hee hee. I can picture Sesshoumaru suddenly figuring out that mortals are affected by the cold. He's just lucky she wasn't awake all night with an evil sniffle.
Heh. Even his misogyny is amusing. I find this a whimsical but believably IC portrayal.
NITS:
"Clothing for a girl child," is part of the previous sentence that includes, "I require." The C in "Clothing" should be lowercase.
Rin would look "good" in fox furs. Looking well would mean that it would improve her vision.Winter Warmth
(#) xxxChaos 2008-11-10
Aiieeeee, I know you wrote this, liek, AGES ago and so on and so fifth but it is just so adorable and EXACTLY what I was in the mood for so THANK YOU SO MUCH. !!!. You're awesome.Winter Warmth
(#) Aza 2010-06-03
So cute! Sesshoumaru thinks bad things about humans, but does everything by Rin. You said 'fox hunt'? I immediately thought of Shippou...
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