(#) Trouble_In_Shangri_L 2005-10-07Awwww, that was so perfectly in character that I had to giggle the entire way. Sesshoumaru is so hard-nosed, yet he knows he cares about Rin. It's sweet in a scary way.
On top of that you have immaculate spelling and grammar, which is hard to find anywhere these days. I commend you.
I enjoyed this immensely.
- Hee hee. I can picture Sesshoumaru suddenly figuring out that mortals are affected by the cold. He's just lucky she wasn't awake all night with an evil sniffle.
Heh. Even his misogyny is amusing. I find this a whimsical but believably IC portrayal.
"Clothing for a girl child," is part of the previous sentence that includes, "I require." The C in "Clothing" should be lowercase.
Rin would look "good" in fox furs. Looking well would mean that it would improve her vision.
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