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The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the story of Ellen & Harry.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) JBern 2006-12-05
Very nice. I liked this version of betrothal. It seemed very natural and had a human element that usually is missing in most 'clinical' marriage pacts. Bravo~JimThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) Shaggy37 2006-12-05
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I can't wait to see the betrothal and then eventually the marriage. Any plans to a sequel to any of the amazing stories you've written? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Younger Potter Twin
(#) JVTazz 2006-12-05
good chapter :)
I think you answered atleast one question I had grinThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) brad 2006-12-06
Well, that's a neat way to write in a romance for Harry even while they're still too young for such things.
I like Mary's reasons ... it made the betrothal much more meaningful and sincere. The ending was nice, although I would have hoped there'd be some way to tell Ellen what she was signing up for BEFORE the spell was cast. She should know she's going to be standing right next to the bulls-eye!
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