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Saying good-bye
1 reviewThis is a young girl's story, of how she is taken from her father and becomes a slave. Will she find happyness? maby. P.S. The warnings are for later chapters.
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A Girl's Tears
(#) elizedward23 2006-11-21
Check your spelling! It's distracting. And "pail" cheeks is not the same as pale cheeks.
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