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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-12-06

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I take it that Harry was the ArchDruid? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) mjc 2006-12-06

  I hate temporal mechanics...
  
  So is it Palin, Idle, Cleese (gotta be Cleese..kinda looks like Nearly Headless Nick, doesn't he?), Gillam, Jones or Chapman that has the connection to someone at the Betrothal party? Since it is a couple of years before the script for Grail is written, that is enough time for one of them to have learned of Harry's line...
  
  The red dragon wiping out the DM was a nice touch.
  
  Can't wait to see what Albus has to say about this...

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-06

  Helluva commanding performance. Think Voldemort will give himself a silver arm? I'm not entirely sure, myself, but it's easy to see how confused and frightened he'll be for a while.
  
  In short, I think this was the best chapter yet.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) matthiasblack 2006-12-06

  Interesting, wonder what Voldemort will do next. Lie low or go offensive again. Well written and I hope to read another chapter soon. Keep up the good work.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Toto 2006-12-06

  Yosh, can't help but think of a mix between raistlin and harry for this image.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Nautilus 2006-12-06

  awesome, updat soon.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) rosiegirl 2006-12-06

  Good one!!

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  (#) JVTazz 2006-12-06

  exciting stuff, though I was hoping for a bit more of a fight between the two of them. That basically made it look almost like Harry vs. a 2 year old grin I imagine the fights will be much better as Harry kind of had the element of surprise :)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) brad 2006-12-08

  So Harry's a 'hacker'!! I liked the idea of his manipulating/changing the betrothal spells.
  
  "I don't want anything sordid to ever touch you" - nice.
  
  "The Killing Curse had to be voiced" -- seemed like a bit of a cop-out there, a sudden complication to stop the AK but not actually stop Voldemort. And why didn't Harry set up an anti-portkey field, as he did later on that night?

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-15

  Really good stuff.
  
  gunny

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