Now that the Dark Lord has returned, the Order of the Phoenix must call in outside help to train their boy savior. Enter one officer used to dealing with the weird, Colonel Jack O'Neill...
Completely brilliant. I had hoped this story hadn't been abandoned, and really enjoyed the latest chapter. The plotline is developing well, giving rise to a whole lot of questions that keep me wanting to know whats happening next. If you don't have a Beta you're really good at self beta'ing because I can't find a single problem with this chapter. A thoroughly enjoyable read, and a brilliant overall story so far. Love it ^_^
'Bout time you updated, I've been looking forward to this
Poor Colonel O'Neill...wishing the same thing that every Hogwarts first year wishes...This is a great story, I love it.
really interesting, i can't wait for the training to start!
Of course Jack has magic - the magic of annoying sarscasm
Looking forward to more?
(#) G7998 2010-12-11
I would like to see more of this one
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