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The Mistake
6 reviewsHarry loses faith in his friends and family and making a drastic decision that has far reaching consequences he leaves ready to start his life over but can he really do that with his friends and fa...
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The Mistake
(#) Cateagle 2006-12-13
Ho, boy. Talk about a "failure to communicate", this is going to take a while to untangle, and that's after they finally managed to get him to talk to them again. Hermione, your self-righteous messed up majorly this time.The Mistake
(#) oldsarge 2010-01-06
About the custody. I kind of agree, but can see that he wouldn't want to take the baby from Hermione either. Particularly if nobody trusts him. Chshre, I sure hope this is not the end of the story. You've got a puzzling start here and need to fill it in, with a resolution. Thanks.Author's response
Thanks for the constructive comments, I've restarted the story because I was unhappy with the way it started off. I will be incorporating bits and pieces of the original, but not telling which ones. You'll just have to follow along to find out.The Mistake
(#) tricorvus 2011-08-28
Great stuff... I will be following this, to see where you take it. :D
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