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Tonight the headphones will deliver you.
3 reviewsKadence has known the boys since she was 5. But one of the boys has a secret. Will Kadence ever know the secret or will she lose her boys forever first? Read more to find out.
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This Curse on Your Lips
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14
Not only do I review, I also rated this because I think it's a promising start! :)
I like the multiple perspectives and the "action" that sets the story off. It's interesting to have Patrick being the "bolder" one (he dated the girl for a while) while Pete didn't have the guts to tell her how he feels/ felt about her. I'll never listen to "Grand Theft Autumn" the same again. ;) Especially funny, since Patrick's singing the words...
Update soon, this is going on my alerts. You may love me forever now. ;)Author's response
Yay!! Thank you so much for the review!!! I will love you forever now!! haha. I thought i'd take make a new perspective of patrick. haha. and Pete wont be as cocky as usual, he's gonna be shy. thanks for the rating too!This Curse on Your Lips
(#) kissxthexbullet 2006-12-14
Okay, I'm reveiwing.
Not for love... but that would be a bonus =]
I really like the story.
You should keep going. Maybe if I review again, I'll get another chapter.
Yes? Yes?
.....Yes?Author's response
yes!! i love you too!!
yess! im bout to post another chapter!
this story is gonna be my new baby!
for sure! hahaThis Curse on Your Lips
(#) itainohime 2007-02-14
Do not state which character's POV you are writing from in the text of the story.Author's response
I change POV's because i have trouble writing certain things in certain POV's. I do it for a reason. But thanks anyway.
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