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Sands of Time
(#) Inuyonas 2006-12-11
what the FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHKKKKKKK!!!! psyche i am kidding it was goodAuthor's response
I was about to cry. Arigouto!Sands of Time
(#) Kyoko-Uchiha 2006-12-15
It was pretty good. I personally liked and would like to hear more.Author's response
Thank you! You rock! I am already working on chapter 3.Sands of Time
(#) des_butterfly 2007-01-24
Honestly? I couldn't read this. You put it all in one huge block paragraph which makes it incredibly hard to read. Also there were numerous spelling mistake, and grammar mistakes. So much that I couldn't even tell if you had at least done well with plot or characterization.
You really need a proofreader or a beta-reader. I can't understand your writing at all.Author's response
Shut up. It wasn't a block paragraph. Retard
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(#) limmy147 2007-03-20
AWWWW it was too short... I love it so much!!! i always love an awsome Hinata and Gaara fan fic and I'm very picky about them and yours has been the very best!!! Keep up the awsome work. A little suggestion the chappters could be a little longer
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