- I wonder if Umbridge will taste like a toad as well, or more like a fat chicken? I really hope this story line has Harry kicking (bitting?) a lot of arse. Literally.
Author's responseNow I won't be able to eat chicken for a while! Happy Holidays~Jim
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-24Another great chapter. I wish Luna could vist Harry. Maybe further their relationship.... I also hope Harry gets to visit the grandaughter.
Author's responseI don't know if an in person visit might be very productive right now. We probably will see more of Lauren Starless Sky before the end of this story.~Jim
(#) JustAReader 2006-12-24great chapter, I'm glad that we've almost made it back to chapter 1. It's nice that things are working out for karina, and I hope things sdtart to go better for Harry and Luna soon.
Author's responseGlad you liked it. I had hoped to make it back to chapter 1 in this chapter, but it was not to be.~Jim
(#) animemonster 2006-12-24This is one of the most originl stories I've ever read in the whole friends/Dumbledore betry/manipulate Harry subgenre. This story is simply amazing, I'm glad I took the time to read it.
Author's responseThank you for the compliment. Hopefully it also ranks somewhere in the top of any fanfic you have read. The inside of Harry's mind is a scary place isn't it?~Jim
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-12-26It's the old "Harry Potter does it when he absolutely has to" trick!
Nice that he finally got control (mostly) of his animagus. Now he can get on with other things. Calling Chico "little meat" was funny.
Nice (sort of) to hear about events back in England. Sorry that Luna is being the ministry's target, though. In stories like this, after the war I expect Harry (and in this case Luna) to just leave the country. She might leave before hand, if they cannot keep publishing the Quibbler there.
Good story. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's responseWell that trick is tried and true. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one will be out this week.~Jim
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-12-26Excellent chapter, as always. I'm curious as to if you've worked the outline for the sequel yet. You have so much stuff set up and going on in the background with Luna. The only thing I'm having a bit of a hard time figuring out is how you're going to wrap it up back to chapter 1.
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