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Cloak and Dagger
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-27
ugh! Love it, but totally at work, so will review truthfully laterz. You god.Author's response
I prefer Goddess. Thanks for the quickie!Cloak and Dagger
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-27
I'm waaay too tired to leave a review worthy enough for this story. So just take my rating point and cuddle with it.Author's response
Any review from you is a worthy review. Cuddles with rating pointCloak and Dagger
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-27
Ha ha, aren't we DoJ sisters the laziest reviewers ever? Actually... usually we are not.
First I had to drop off a rating point since I found this chapter very insightful. Explained CoCo's hysterics and everything. Smooth move, Nice Spice. (I like the sound of that.)
I found myself reading so fast because I wanted to know what happens next that I ran the risk of not comprehending anything at all. ;) But I did slow down. It's hard not to greedily devour the next and the next sentence with an exciting story like this one.
It's always worth to wait for a new CeCe update. :)Author's response
I find myself doing the reading too fast all the time. I'm flatered that you did that with my story. I take that as a great compliment. I will try to update soon!
I miss you DoJ girls!Cloak and Dagger
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-28
love it, as usual. its so sad, but i'm hooked :] u know i love sad stories.Author's response
I love sad stories too! That may be why I write them. Ah, well, thanks for being hooked!Cloak and Dagger
(#) riaryder 2006-12-29
Sad but sweet. Loving your beautiful writing. Have a point :-)Author's response
Thanks for the rating point. blushesCloak and Dagger
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01
i wrote this while reading. now mind you, it was written at about 1:00 this morning after a 9 hour drive, so if it doesn't make sense it's prolly not suppose to.
1.) I love how patrick wasn't completely unselfish- very realistic. i think i was referring to One question still remained. How was he going to convince her to stay? - i think i meant to say it's refreshing that he isn't completely focused on that one aspect of what the revelation meant.
2.) the foreshadowing is perfect: She knew it was ridiculous to think that he could stop Kiefer if he were to show up, but she couldn't help but feel safe around Patrick.
and that's all i have to say about that. except that i have a million rating points, and i totally want you to have two of them.
that, and i miss you. my life isn't complete without the nice spice.Author's response
I have to respond by saying that there is a void in my life without my strange spice. That's right. I'm claiming you as my own. Hope you don't mind.
Thanks for the wonderful review as always. You are the best cheerleader a drama-rama writer like myself could have. SMOOCHES!
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