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Explanations are offered and Buffy gets a job offer
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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-12-27
OK, this chapter was interesting, although the length was disappointing. I like the fact that you have Buffy agreeing to help out and teach, but she needs, at this point to contact the Scoobies and let them know she's OK, since now that you've explained the demensions have combined. Additionally, It's blurring a bit on Harry's interests adding her to the mix, and if this is to remain Harry/Fleur, as what you have so far you need to solidify that relationship more so than what you have so far. Additionally, still no Avatar. Disappointing that it's taking this long for a little Ang to arrive. Please update soon. I am enjoying your story so far, interesting twist. Always enjoy a good cross over when done right.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2006-12-27
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I doubt that Snivellus will ever be diplomatic when it comes to Harry or his friends because he's to much of a douche. Anyways I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Any chance of this turning into a Harry/Fluer/Buffy story? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) guamja 2008-06-07
Snade, Diplomatic....I think not.
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