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Once Upon a Hoodie
(#) kristina1 2006-12-28
lol I love this story please keep going and post as soon as u can!!!^_^ PLEASE!!!Once Upon a Hoodie
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2006-12-29
Much love. And don't feel too bad about him taking your hoodie. Like Matt Good from From First To Last, I hung out with him once with my solid black chucks then the next day they performed and look who had my shoes. I chewed him out about it and he offered to buy me some other shoes. Gotta love the kid. Meanwhile, I do adore. Please keep it up.Once Upon a Hoodie
(#) xImRadx 2006-12-29
Aww, that was cute! I luff Brendon, and even though he took your hoodie...you have to admit he did look good in it. Haha, I saw that show, They were at Starland for me.
Cute story, hope you continue it...just a little constructive critisism (If I even spelled that right) Try putting all your charactures actions in past tense, like he opened the door not he opens the door. I dunno, it just sounds better. But im no story writer.
Much luff, good luck on continuing your story.Once Upon a Hoodie
(#) trueLIEx3 2007-02-12
More please? I absolutely love the idea. And it's funny. =]].Once Upon a Hoodie
(#) xtearcatcherx 2007-03-14
aha, I love your story
by the way your REALLY pretty :)Author's response
Oh, thanks. blushes
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