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• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) riaryder 2006-12-29

  As sweet as a tunnocks tea cake washed down with fat irn bru.
  "Give me a first kiss," Too cute for words.
  You know you get wan a ma wee points, like.

  Author's response

  ye ken - you're a wee bundle of homegrown love wrapped in McAllister Tartan! You Rock!

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) xxlaurenxx 2006-12-29

  i agree with the person below me; the first kiss line was adorable. i adore this story, its amazing

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) LOVELA 2006-12-30

  I love it! And being the psych freak that I am, I love that you are incorporating PTSD into the whole mix. Wonderous as always!

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-30

  looks frantically for jaw on the floor
  
  I CANNOT believe YOU.
  
  Rating point by airmail!
  
  "Against total spend on consumables and costs within property across Chase in Human Resources, we've seen a dramatic development in how the budget was spread across the year, this balanced out key interest and therefore saved $72,000. " she said professionally. As she spoke, she wondered how she'd developed this far as a speaker, just being in the job and doing it day in day out was her only source of training. -> I am so buying this. Ah, the authenticity. Of course, I know jack… but I think it’s authentic. ;)
  
  Ella should take her irregular heart beat seriously. Some people are so smart when it comes to certain things and so dumb when it comes to others. Frustrating.
  
  she was a short woman with a big mission -> Katy’s famous eye for details. Lovely. :)
  
  "5 courses....of which 2, were desserts...." He said biting his bottom lip. -> AW! Biscuit. Can I… maybe go with Patrick… since Ella has to stay at the hospital? Pwease?

  Author's response

  hands you jaw
  Seriously. Miss Me.

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01

  it's very (like alex said) authentic. again i'm last at this game, and everything i want to say has already been said...but i wanted to let you know that i am in love with this story. "end of"

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) MMMramen 2007-01-05

  I'm sooo ashamed of myself. I've let this story slip through my fingers. Now I must play some serious catch up. But I promise it will never happen again. I'll be a good little reviewer from now on. Interesting chapter. I like that you touched on how her mother's passing affects Ella physically as well as mentally.

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