"You were living before me, so you can live without me," I said coldly, surprised at my own voice, my own calmness.
"I wasn't living until I met you,"
Hi I love you.
I loved it.
Did you post this on livejournal? 'Cause I swear...I read this somewhere else! But damn...it was just as good on the other site. GOOD JOB!!!!!!
It's okay...It's very true to Ryan's personality though. If you could just fix the paragraphs so it's not so stringy that would be nice.
yeah so this story is pretty much amazing. yess. just thought you should know that. & your a spectacular writer. this story is one of my loves. :]
Wow. your story is truley the shit....I love you. Lol.
How can you not love a Bden and Ry story? There so adorable together. Plus almost all of there pictures there all over each other anyway lol.
YOur story is veyr very well writen...and I enjoyed it alot. Kudos to you.its hard to find many good Bren and Ry stories if any at all. So thank you.
Hopefully this wasnt just a one shot and you will continue, I'll be checking back.
I'm officially in love with this story.
It was, in lack of better words, adorable.
I loved it. (Obviously)
I loved it, it was truly amazing, it had heart felt emotions in it made me wann smiled ab it
(#) Elia 2009-05-29
'And we were secure.'
That is a very cool ending line.
I like how this is written. Yours is definitely one of the better top-ranked things... because some of the others are just... meh. This one is quite wonderful~
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