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Glass
(#) horsie890 2007-01-02
This is pretty good. The word Lexaeus' would actually be Lexaeus's. I'm a grammar fanatic that way. The way you first described it, I thought it would be another OC story (I've written about 10 of them, so I sort of like them), but it was a lot better than that. You have real skill with describing things, and you don't make a lot of the common mistakes I usually see. Good job!Author's response
Actually, in proper grammar, when you any word ending with an 's' that needs a possesive 's', you simply put an apostrophe above it, but it IS a still-debated though, haha. And thanks SO MUCH for your kind words; I appreciate them more than you know.Glass
(#) Tenchi_Kai 2007-02-11
Wow. I really liked this story. Axel is very in character, and it seems that no one else can really get that right. I enjoyed it; it's going in my favs. ^^;;
~KaiAuthor's response
thank you very much :)
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