(#) ray15 2007-01-04
That was an excellent poem. You've really got talent. Buh-bye now!
It was great although in the fifth stanza the rythm and rhyming didn't quite work out but it's often difficult to keep that right.
Thanks. Actually, that was a deliberate decision on my part not to make the items in the fourth stanza rhyme.
That's me! I'm hoping that perhaps I can pay for college with this book that I'm writing. I just LOVE to write, and the plus side is, I'm good at it! I think that you are an excellent writer and should pour out Truth to the world!
Awsome poem... great work!
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