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No one knows what hid behind those dark, emotionless eyes. No one had the time to find out. As soon as they saw her, their fate was sealed.
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The Angel, Death Angel
(#) Bitter-Irony 2007-01-06
A very beautiful poem, and the last line was chilling! As far as rhyming goes, though, you really should pick one scheme and stick with it. But a lovely poem nonetheless--it gives you something to think about.
~Bitter Irony
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