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"Oh, love is trouble"
13 reviewsSheena confides in an old friend and explains what's currently pulling her down. Her Highness Hairball is appalled about the lack of attention we have been paying to her and decides to make a point...
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The Curse of the Curls
(#) riaryder 2007-01-04
Aw, poor Sheena. How can I feel sorry for someone who's married to the biscuit?
'Got plink?' Oh I laughed my ass off at that one.
And Hedwig is just comedy genius.
Forgive me for rating this funny despite poor Sheena's suffering, because it is and you are xxAuthor's response
I know, let's blame Sheena. It's her fault. ;)
Thanks for the point. I had difficulties making this chapter funny because Sheena's talking about something more serious. Hedwig is pretty plinky, I guess. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-04
isnt hedwig the name of the owl in harry potter :D:D:D
poor sheena...
UpDaTe SOON!!!Author's response
Yeah, it is. I couldn't think of a more hideous German name though.
Thanks for the review. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-04
first of all--
I loved this chapter. I think I just love Sheena a whole bunch.
Are we supposed to not know who Sheena was talking to? (ie: it doesn't matter its just a member of fob) 'cause I definitly don't think it was Pete.
It's nice to see reinforcment that Sheena still hearts Patrick.
Kylene was tolerable this chapter--and was being nice to Hedwig? was this a fluke? lol
secondly--
zomg! hug thankyou!! for the footnote. i heart you forever times a gazillion.
(and random little side note unrelated to your story: someone suggested pete and molly get together. dies)
-your friendly neighborhood BridgetAuthor's response
Thank you for giving me reassurance about the chapter. (I hope) it's not gonna get all that serious, after all this story is supposed to me my comedic release. ;)
Nope, you are not supposed to know who. ;) Yes, it just matters that it's a member of FOB. We'll see how I can continue the story with the guys' (regular) appearances without giving too much away. Oh well, if somebody finds out it's gonna be alright, too.
Yes, Kylene was tolerbale in this chapter. Because she got so say like what? Two sentences?
You are welcome. I really love your story. I read that Molly-Pete review and was literally saying "Yeah, right." out loud. ;)
Thanks for your meaningful reviews and the little chick-chat. :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) patrickdance4me 2007-01-04
nice chapter. but who was the fine visitor?Author's response
Thank you. :) Well either Andy, Joe or Pete. And just because you call him "fine" doesn't automatically mean it's Pete, mind you. :P ;)The Curse of the Curls
(#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-04
NOOOO.
You can't use sheep milk, I say so. Sheeps have cool coats.
Ackk.
And this again, was an amazing chapter. I love this story, and hedwig makes me laugh. But i need to know who the 'visitor' was. Or else. GRR.
Mwahaa.
P.S-It's nice that you dedicated this to Ev and Aiden. =]Author's response
Sorry about that. Somehow I knew I would offend somebody. It's just slightly surprising that it wasn't Bush this time.
Hedwig thanks you for the praise. There will be more of her in the next chapter. Bring on the "or else". ;)
Thanks. I can be nice sometimes. Just don't get used to it. So where's your update?The Curse of the Curls
(#) LOVELA 2007-01-04
Dude. Who the hell was the visitor? Why the secret? I demand to know!
WHOA! That was so not nice!? Uh oh. The mystery has made nice spice not so nice. DUN DUN DUN.Author's response
How would I know? Sheena didn't mention his name, dude.
Stop turning me on...The Curse of the Curls
(#) jessiearei 2007-01-04
ooh sheena had a little break down.
who was the visitor?
im dying to know!
i think it may have been andy? maybe?
haha update again soon!Author's response
Some guy... just some guy. Yes, Andy. Maybe. :)
Thanks for the r&r.The Curse of the Curls
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-01-04
I'm guessing the mystery guess is Pete? Do I get a cookie if I win?Author's response
You can have a cookie now. hands you cookie It will stop you from guessing. ;)The Curse of the Curls
(#) MMMramen 2007-01-05
Is it wrong to be jealous of a chapter being dedicated to Aiden and Evie? Having a namesake just isn't enough for me. I need more!
AANNNNNDDD, I'm over it. Cute little chappie, miss Alex. But who was her mysterious visitor? I have an idea, but I don't want to sound stupid...er.Author's response
Next chapter goes out to you. Cos I kiss ass like that.
Ha ha...
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