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Hybrids: Metamophosis
(#) Cobalt-Blue 2007-01-06
Chapter 2 Review: Very nice. I really like the way you are taking this. I'm wondering however, why the first part is in italics. I could understand just the letter being italics, but not the first part. There's a strange jump at the end of it. Is it supposed to be a flashback? If so, you might want to put a date or something at the beginning. Please keep up the good work. I really like it. It's nice to find another author doing super hero type stuff that doesn't read like a twelve year old.
Danny aka Cobalt BlueAuthor's response
Oh, yeah. The part in italics is a flashback. ^^ Putting a date on it is a good idea, and it may help me organize the whole backstory/stuff. Thanks so much~!
I'm glad it doesn't read like a twelwe year old, as well. And thanks again!
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