This is a very sweet poem, with a nice sort of rhythm to it. It give me a warm, peacful feeling when I read it. :-) Nice job!
Thanks. I hope it gives off a peaceful feeling as it's a poem I'd send out to friends wishing them good night. :)
Your writing sucks! Remember me? The girl who wrote The Story of Lexi Wilson. Well I hate you! And I don't care about your opinions!
I stand by that review. Now, if you have something to say about my work, feel free to do so. But please give me something more substantive to work with than "It sucks." Kthnxbye!
Hi again this was amazing and I agree that it gave off a peaceful feeling. The last three lines,in my opinion, were a bit confusing with punctuation. But like I said that's just my opinion. I loved the poem all in all. You're an amazing author
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