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Calm Before The Storm

by rainydaykid13 1 review

Patrick finally discovers Micah is pregnant... with twins?! [[sorry i suck at writing summaries xD]]

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama, Romance - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007-01-13 - Updated: 2007-01-13 - 1697 words

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Love Will Tear Us Apart

(#) 44caliber 2007-01-13

your story is really good, but there is some confusion over the POV at times, and the repetiton is a little odd. your timeline is a bit blurry too... but you have a really good plot, and exceptional writing skills. radtacular :)
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thanks for the help! glad you like it! ^^

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