Orphen thinks about his companions and shares a moment with Majic. Tiny hint of shounen ai.
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(#) Sysi 2007-08-16
This is a really... powerful story and your style of writing suits it perfectly. I'm happy you haven't tried to make it longer, since that might have flattened the atmosphere of the story.
(#) Sysi 2007-08-16
This is a really... powerful story and your style of writing suits it perfectly. I'm happy you haven't tried to make it longer, since that might have flattened the atmosphere of the story.
(#) Sysi 2007-08-16
This is a really... powerful story and your style of writing suits it perfectly. I'm happy you haven't tried to make it longer, since that might have flattened the atmosphere of the story.
(#) Sysi 2007-08-16
This is a really... powerful story and your style of writing suits it perfectly. I'm happy you haven't tried to make it longer, since that might have flattened the atmosphere of the story.
(#) Sysi 2007-08-16
I'm truly sorry - my computer is being difficult. I didn't mean to post the same review four times...
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