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Essential Life Elements
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03
this poem is a bit confusing. "Daggers that shoot eyes"? what's that supposed to mean?Essential Life Elements
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03
this poem is a bit confusing. "Daggers that shoot eyes"? What's that supposed to mean?Essential Life Elements
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03
sorry for the repeated reviews. My computer's being idiotic. and I meant to say "Daggers that eyes shoot"Essential Life Elements
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03
sorry for the repeated reviews. My computer's being idiotic. and I meant to say "Daggers that eyes shoot"Essential Life Elements
(#) Lyanvis 2008-08-05
This poem is a touch onesided. You never do explain yourself on how not dealing with them can hurt as well, either.
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